I have chossen to revise my litteracy narrative, because it is the first essay I wrote for this class and I want to see how my English skills have improved over the semester. The strengths of my essay are that I organized my essay with an intro, a body and a conclusion. I feel like the weaknesses in my literacy nerrative are my grammar as well as my thesis and I don't think I catch my readers attention.
To revise my essay I am going to try to tell the story in a different way. I am going to begin by brainstorming for new and different ideas. I am going to re-write my essay and then I am going to visit the writing center after meeting with the proffessor then I am going to do a one on one peer review.
I am hoping to find another way to tell the story in a more interesting way. I don't think I caught my readers attention. My story I felt was boring and didn't make my reader want to continue readding, as if the reader was thinking so what? The only thing that I can do is appeal to my audience using humor or emotional appeal.
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